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Yo Soy Asi

I'm not nice
Deal with it.

I am awesome
Eat your heart out.

I am blessed with art
Question not my gift.

I'm a certified reb
Tell on me if you will.

I am a child of smiles
I care not if you quirk brows.

I am God's most favored child
Complain to Him or go to hell.

Author notes

I am what I am
Hate me if you want
Love me if you dare
I am just like this
No hard feelings folks!

Syllabic pattern: 3-4-5-6-7-8

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Comments

  • I really like this, a very strong piece with a good message. =]


  • PorcelainHope
    October 22

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    I feel some kind of hostility going on here. Well this is a nice straightforward piece. Could be good with music as there is a lyric feel in it.

    Keep writing!