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halloween noon







halloween noon --
playing trick or treat
the sun

















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  • Draig aine gold member
    November 3
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    congradulations on the greenie

    this made me smille!


  • Swan song gold member
    October 31
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    lol nice play on the prompt i liked it


    • Sai Babas Lotus
      October 31
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      Thank you so much for the Honourable mention and points for this haiku. Today, we trimmed our garden and the Halloween sun seemed to be playing peek-a-boo with me :-)

      Warm regards,
      Charishma