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memories in the dark

he looks to her,
she wants to look away.
but her thoughts always turn to him.

his smile,
the blue eyes that shined
like the sun in the morning sky,
the happy moment they had in their time.

but why does she still look for him in the dark?
maybe she still need him to hold her hand,
but its just a lie.

deep down the love still shines forever,
in painful memories
in scars on her heart.

she could never love him,
like she once did.
it would only be a lie.
that she could with to be truth,
her heart can only take soo much.

she stands their in the breeze,
a forbidden love blowing in the air.
she wants to scream,
but for a price?

the anger inside of her,
the lust will not win,
if it maybe..
just let it die..

she never sees him again.
just hid the forgotten memories in the dark.

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  • Darkmoon
    November 8
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    It was a pretty good poem. Thanks for the entry and good luck.


  • Guerrero
    October 22
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    that was great. i wouldnt change anything. i love the realness in this piece