I am full
of inconsistencies
errors,and malfunctions,
my processors burnt out
too much data
too much input
from too many
nothings important,
please keep moving,
floundering in a world
of techno babble,losing
my humanity in
a world filled
with illusionist hiding
behind
a screen,
error flashing in
front of me
and with
a sigh,closing eyes
and hit escape-
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3-11-09
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wish there was an esc button a lot too.
liked the metaphor. enjoyed this piece. thanks
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i missed this, you have a interesting style in your writing that just makes it comes alive, at least to me, i enjoy it , keep it flowing
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what a great analogy for how we (well at least I) feel so often. Great rhythm to the piece and some really interesting use of language. As usual I so enjoyed your piece! Definitely have felt this way, probably too often. :-) Hope you are well! Blessings!
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You have
Hit the nail on the head, I thinks this is a super poem. I have spent thousands of pounds on gadgets with extra features and when it comes down to it, i still only use the on/off button. And how is it that since I have had the internet, I've never been so interactive with so many people....yet never been less social either ? If only we could hit that escape button....bliss !
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