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genesis

my shoulder pinned
under your chin,
your arms
envelope, encase, ensnare me within
a cocoon of tendons and skin
that ossify as you close your eyes.
i emerge with the sun in the sky.
i slip out like butter,
and fly
silently into the day as it breaks. 

Author notes

sorry that it rhymes; it just happened as i was writing it. hope you like it anyway.

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  • Emerald Dog
    November 15
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    Your words slip out like butter and fly so beautifully.


  • DogFish silver member
    November 14
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    "sorry that it rhymes"

    rhyming qualifies as poetry, don't worry; even if this didn't rhyme it would qualify as poetry!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 22

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    Rhyme is not a problem.