What's it going to take
To make you notice me
How will you like it when I break
From this long distance
Is it so hard to tell them I'm the one
Why am I not good enough
What is it about me
That embarrases you so fucking much
Girls flood your doorstep
Beautiful inside and out
Girls that I know blend in you
Girls that are not long distance
So why keep me around like this
Dangling on a string
Reaching for anything from you
Wishing I would be your one
Your only
This is long distance
It's not easy staying away
You'll come to me
When your ready
When you grow tired
Of the mirror between us
What will it take
To make me your only
What must I do
To be noticed
How can I win you over
For real this time
Just take me in your arms
Allow me inside
You know me so well
Don't let this go
I'm so in love with you
No one compares to you
In the night I dream of you
Lusting wishes make me ache
Over accumulation of the situation
Vows to be your only one
Everything is laid out for you
You just have to take one step
One step with me
Urk me no more
Make me your only
Love me the way I know you can
It's long distance
So end it now
Author notes
Read this at a poetry reading awhile back. Figured I'd post it.
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Wow, that one hits a spot. I had a couple situations like this, one recent and another farther back and this expresses what I thought very well. Very nice write, it gets the feelings across and lets the reader feel the tug of emotions.
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Ive found that LDR tends to suck major sock sucking arse. (forgive the random comments) Im on cold meds. lol (i hate meds) ANYWAYS, and thank you.
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Ha ha, some work well, some not so much. It depends on the people involved and their character type. (lol at the meds, I hate them too) You're very welcome.
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