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I've missed you

You always came
When I'd least expect it.
I just had to turn around,
I could only see one thing,
and Those eyes were it.



I've missed you,
My darling Muse.
How long do you plan to stay?
Just a few nights
Or a year or two?
Either way, you've made my day.



I want to ask so much
But I know you wouldn't answer at all.
You'd just give me that brilliant smile
And tell me to be greatful-
You came right before my fall.



Maybe you've heard my cries.
I haven't pulled out my pen in a while
Darling, I feel so low,
But you just sit there
Giving me a playful smile.



No more complaints,
Let's start anew.
My writing's not so great,
But when I close my eyes
All I see are those eyes of blue.



It feels safe
But stupid.
Why obsess over a figment
Of my imagination?
Maybe there's just nothing left.
Maybe there's just nothing left.







((I've missed you.))

Author notes

The Muse.
Muse.

L-Like the muse I wrote about for basically a whole year.

Oh my god. She hit me again during select.

During Select, for god's sake, when I didn't even have my music with me.
When...when I wasn't even thinking about writing/planning on not even trying to write for a while. Until I'm happier or something.


and then this.


Holy shit. Holy shit. Holy shit.
I know it's crap.
But it's something
And then I'll keep writing
And get better.
Maybe learn how to rhyme properly again,
Because you don't write about Muse without rhyme.



Yes, I know it's crap. But I love this crap. Oh my god.

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Comments

  • My writing's not so great

    on that statement i call bs, there is nothing crap about this it is far from it, it is golden, keep it flowing


  • SlowlyBreathing
    October 22

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    Meh.
    It is fine, Lena. Better than fine. Be more postitive. *Ha, I just got my self to laugh. Huge hypocrite much*
    Promise, it is fine.
    I like it.
    XDDDD


  • Coloured Skies
    October 22

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    This is crap, it's pretty impressive. Normally I don't read longish poems, but I read this one. I was g.l.u.e.d! So very good piece! It's good you managed to write something after your muse had died. I'm glad it came back to you