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Journey

open door
light-less space
wander in
lost soul
forever shadows
shattered sanity
madness everlasting
see light
struggle on
hopeless dream
accepting solitude
embracing insanity
clutching knife
ending all
sacred sleep
silence

Author notes

Just some random thoughts that floated through my mind as I tried ever so hard to pay attention in chemistry the other day. I really meant to listen, honest I did.

enough of that drivel.

take what meaning and enjoyment you can from this. the two words per line thing started as an accident and then I stuck with it. Thought the final line being only one word gave it more depth. yeah, figure that one out...less is more?

anyway

enjoy

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    November 13
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    Enjoyed your random floating thoughts which took me there to a slum where dreams are very often shattered.