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Pear

PEAR
Pears are delicious
Enjoy the taste
A sweet flavor
Rising the seed


























Allen Hollandsworth
©10/21/09

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did for school time preschool word of the day

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  • serenity silvermoon
    October 22

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    short but good i like pears not as much as peaches though i remember the first time i ever had a real peach it was when i was 8 years old my dad and my uncle took me to see my brother for the very first time in the Almis Country and we stop by a stand with fruit and we bought peaches and plums and that was the first time i ever had a real peach and a real plum thank you for sharing keep on writing you are getting better at it