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Tu me Manques

I miss your lips...
I want to see their startling redness
I want to feel their fullness
I want to taste their sweetness
Again
and again.

How I miss your lips...
  The words that they form
  Both sweet and dauntless
  The perfect smile nothing can deform
  Not anxiety, not even stress.

I miss your eyes...
  Their glint of mischief,
    of impish humor,
    and of remembered intimacy
  I want to see how they crinkle
    when you're trying to look cute
  I want to watch how they twinkle
  How gaily they glow
  When I play the flute
  Only for you.

How  I miss your eyes...
  The untold jokes and unheard laughter
  The unspoken love and unshed tear
  The pain you didn't openly share
  I have seen all those
  When we stood close
  And I looked into your eyes.

  That was before
  But I want to look at them once more
  I want to see everything again
  The gleam of happiness, even of sorrow and pain.

How  I miss you...
I want to see you
And kiss you
Again
and again.

Author notes

Tu me manques. In French, I miss you. D:

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  • JToddUnderhill
    November 9

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    hell Yes....

    ..... I knew I would not be let down by this contest. This one rocked. though it is a blind contest I stongly suspect I know who wrote this poem and Bravo! Most powerful line for me is "The unspoken love and unshed tear"


  • lovlilmystery
    November 7

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    Such a wonderful read and an amazing poem. Love how you painted the picture, with your beautiful words. Good luck in the contest. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • ubercrazygirl gold member
    November 5

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    this write brings tears to my eyes and a heavy feeling in my heart, which is a sign of a fantastic write. Well done, I enjoyed every line. Thank you for entering.


  • MzDimeDivia
    October 23

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    Tu me Manques

    WHAT DOES YOUR TITLE MEAN
    IT CAPTURES ME .
    I FEEL IT AND HAVE THE NEED TO WANT IT.
    I miss your lips...
    I want to see their startling redness
    I want to feel their fullness
    I want to taste their sweetness
    Again
    and again.
    I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF
    OMG
    IT MAKES ME THINK
    IT MAKES ME FEEL
    I WANT IT
    DESIRE IT
    BREATH IT
    THIS IS THE KIND OF WORK I NEED
    GREAT JOB
    GOOD LUCK IN THIS CONTEST
    That was before
    But I want to look at them once more
    I want to see everything again
    The gleam of happiness, even of sorrow and pain.
    KEEP IT UP


  • Ice Queen
    October 22

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    Yes, your right I can relate to this piece. Job well done, I felt your emotions in this. Very good and you have an absolutely wonderful talent.

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