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my world

Love, you're my world; without you I'm lost in a darkness of shadow. A shadow so dark, it's like you are suffocating with dispair

Dispair so enveloping you feel there's nothing to live for. What's the use in trying anymore? It's true, if I lost you, I would feel this. I can't take it any longer, I long to hold you in my arms, see that smile, sparkle in your eyes. The way you love me, it's heaven just to be in your presence, when you look at me that special way I drown in the love your eyes shine forth.

I need you my love, please say you'll stay

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  • Lovely write, you expressed yourself so beautifully for the one you love. A very heartfelt and touching piece. Nice choice of words and a sweet dedication to your love