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Time

Time flows as a gentle stream
Which tumbles on its way;
      Invisible to those who watch
           Too closely,
      And uneventful to those who see
           Too much,
      But ever so serene to those who simply
           Wait, patiently,
      And fall into the embrace of it's melody
           Without longing or needing;
           Without care or worry;
           Without thought or motive;
And then
There is peace.

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    October 23

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    great!! good luck with the contest! welcome to AP! I hope you enjoy your stay here. You are off to a great start with this piece. thanks for sharing...
    -Kendal


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 22

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    This was very good and really enjoyable to read. It was very nicely done. I enjoyed it. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest.