beyond the grassey meadow
lays a borderline of trees
full in fall colours
lined so perfectly
the colours were amazing
all gold and red and green
oh i wish you
could have been there
looking at them with me
Please tell me what you think
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excellent
Paints a wonderful picture with the longing of a partner to be with to share it. Don
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Fall was my and Richards favorite time of the year. We would travel the Blueridge Parkway and find quaint places to stay. I love this poem and it speaks so much to my hearat.
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the sky line is beautiful
iam glad it brought you warm memories bless you
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Thank you, Raggyann! I am taking your lovely poem to Poetry Planet and then I will send you the link so that you can see it there.
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yes you can post my poem
iam honored you asked me
bless you
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Good Poet, I, too, love this poem and would like to post it on the poetry blog I run for my newspaper in California, "The Reporter." The name of the poetry blog is "Poetry Planet" and we get a LOT LOT LOT of hits every day. Your poem would be appreciated and I hope you will let me do this. You would be the guest poet of the day.
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please feel free to post it bless you
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Awww... I love this poem so MUCH!
It could have been said by my dear mum because she was so happy when surrounded by nature. Me, too. 
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I get so many emotions from this. Amazing considering it is a short piece. I love it
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thank you so very much
i apreciate that
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