You toyed with my head
and used me like garbage.
Fuck you.
You're my drug
you're in my head
you're in my veins...
I'll cut this cord
that connects us,
I'll erase you...
your memory,
your thought
your touch.
I love you
and I love you
enough to let you go
but I was never truly
in love with you.
You're a player,
a shell of a man.
You used my kindness
to get what you want,
You used my sexuality
to pleasure yourself.
You raped my personality...
I love you,
you're a great
person,
but I was never
truly truly in love with you.
It's time to let you go.
Author notes
Greg my love...you're in my memory...you're in my heart...but I hate to love you.
A contest entry
- "I love you enough to let you go." ♥ by charmander13.
700 points, ends December 2, 34 entries
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Comments
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I love this.
I hate being emotionally dependent on people, and missing them when they are gone (argghhhhh) but anyhow,
I'll cut this cord
that connects us,
I'll erase you...
I wish it was so easy
Good Job.
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Perplexing
I like this piece but I must admit
that its troubling and confusing.
You mixture of emotions take me
on a rollercoaster ride of feelings
that leave me almost numb.
Still, I like the way you expressed
your feelings. Nice job
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I love this.
"I'll cut this cord
that connects us,
I'll erase you...
your memory,
your thought
your touch."
-Powerful and strong in the assertive voice of the first-person.
"You raped my personality..."
-This line is awesome.
Great job with the prompt.
I'm putting you on the finalists list.
Thank you so much for your entry and all the best to you! :
♥ Char
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