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Invisable friend

There is a house

that is at the end of the street
that this family has moved in
and they had a son named Michael  
he had a friend named Anna
and they loved to play hide in seek

 one day he was outside and Anna hid

 so good that Michael
could not find her so he went to get his Mom
and they looked and looked for Anna

they could not find her so they went down the
path that went to a tree

there they and seen a patch of grass with a stone

in the middle of it
they went to it and saw the name Anna

and he looked at his
mom she was shocked and chilled
even though the sun was

shining she knew that her
sons friend was a ghost all

she could remember was the
etching on the stone Anna 1902 -1910.

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 22
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    Congratulations sweety !
    Such a good poem but remember to add some line breaks in there next time.


  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    October 21

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    Oh wow Sunshine Princess, this is just exceptional!
    Lot's of mystery in this write and just so exquisitely written!
    Excellent story and so very interesting..held my attention!
    Thank you so much for your entry and good luck!

  • excellent

    Very good Genna. Nice to read something new of yours again.
    It's been so long. Hope you're doing well.
    Thanks for sharing.