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Buried Deep

depression;
i can feel it

never thought
this could happen
to someone like
me

crippled by
emotion

i had it all,
the girl of my dreams;
i still love her
so much..
and friends beyond
all other

trying to fit
in, with
someone
who
CARES
about me..
even just a little

misused,
and abandoned
far to many
times

thoughts crawl over
my skin, as life's shit
boils over.

that somehow
warming..
idea
of suicide

it's becoming too late,
i'm ending my fate.

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times have changed, before my very eyes. i never thought this could happen to me.

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 13

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    wow...very emotional, powerful write. depression can happen to anyone. one minute your on top of the world and the next you want to die in a hole. but once your down, there's only up again. that's what I think all the time when I get really depressed ...tho, doesn't always work...I tend to be a real drama queen when Im depressed...or I just dont talk to anyone for a long time...so they can't remind me of that.

    things will get better




  • amnouup
    November 3
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    We

    We never know what will happen- it just happens, very emotional write, can feel it really


  • SomeGirlYouKnew
    November 1

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    D:

    this is sad....

    and i like how the short lines gave me time to think as i read through it.

    but. isnt that just what people do? try to make room for themselves where they are wanted?

    i wonder how personal this poem is.


  • the.raven.girl
    October 29

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    Me again That was fantastic. I can always feel the emotion in your poems so well. You're a great writer, ya know. And yu probably don't care about what i think cause you don't know me lol but I know what its like to feel like life is over, but theres always some reason to keep going and Im sure there are so many people who care about you alot even if it doesn't seem like it right now.


  • joliemere
    October 27

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    Its never over. I can so sympathize. I have been there more than once.
    Some of my writes may confirm that. Life's a roller coaster. You're way up, the next minute you're lower than low. You just have to hang on until you are on your way back up again. Great write. I can feel your pain and I truly feel your hurt. Keep writing as an outlet. Just don't end it....

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