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Happy Imagine This

"What are you thinking about?"
One is want to ask,
That is,
If you can't tell.

Nothing but silence in a smile,
Dark eyes straining to seem calm;
Still...
I can see you search for the answer.

How foolish it seems
To hide behind hands,
Sighs,
And a simple blush.

But of course the answer is "you"
When you are,
In fact,
The one I'm lying next to.

So ask me again,
My answer can't change -
Despite how often
You think it will.

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  • CaptainObvious gold member
    October 22

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    Great poem. It speaks the truth in a beautiful way. Nice job.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 21
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    Oh no, I like the first answer you give. I'm satisfied that you think of me.

    Nicely done. Such silly insecure things lovers can be.

    • insideinsanity
      October 22

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      Lol. ^.^ Yes, they are. I love moments like this though, whether it be snuggling up for a movie or just waking up. It's sweet, because you know when the person asks, they're already thinking about you.

      • Pure Thought silver member
        October 22

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        I don't always see it that way. I only ask if I get the feeling they are somewhere else. Not that I care, I'm just curious. (is that a bad way to be?)

        • insideinsanity
          October 23
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          MMm, I can actually see where you get that idea. When I wrote this, I was seeing someone there. But I could certainly see this question into a phone, the dark, or in your own mind.

          And no, curiousity is never a crime!

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