Such beautiful eyes
Unleash a majestic power
Now as she smiles
Something inside me
Holds my very heart
Incredable warmth
Navigates through
Every part of my soul
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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As always you chose the words amazingly and beautiful !!!
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I love to read your acrostic's! Always a treasure to read scuh lovely little poems! "Something inside me holds my very heart" Love those lines! Great penning Ed...
~Sie
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This is an adoreable acrostic. It spills love and adoration all over the page. Ahh...isn't love grand. I am a fan of this art form and you my friend have made me love this form even more. Beautiful!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Ed...love this acrostic...You always show such a passionate heart in what you write...This is no exception...Love it!
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It's good to see you writing again Ed. I know how time consuming and tiring courses can be but you've chosen some beautiful words for your first poem in a while. You always were so very good at putting feelings into words.
Take care
Love Margaret
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Very lovely Acrostic Ed. Sorry I haven't been by, have been in hospital & not well until now.
Regards Joan
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been a while, nice to see you pen is still pressed against the paper, kind of a warm poem that you wrote here, keep it flowing
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That, my friend is love in its simplest form and a write that is sunshine in itself. It has been a while since you have put pen to paper and given us a treat but I think it was worth the wait. Constructive criticism won't come from this corner as it reads so wondrously to me. a pleasure to have come by.
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What a sweet and loving acrostic!
I so love this!
Been a long time since I've had the pleasure of reading your poetry, my friend!
All the best to you!
Sandy
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