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Enveloped In Fear

Missing image

Singularly sitting and casting my thoughts

Out of my head they pour into the night.

Leaving and heading out of sight

Yet finely remaining a part of me

 

Wonderment surrounds

pales into comparison

As fear steps forth its mighty hand

with gentle touch it caresses

 

Gently it readies to overpower

Questioning my reasoning 

Enslaving, possessing, ripping

 

Great ravines

Sitting with my thoughts

Unable to dissect right from wrong

Do I or Don't I

 

Will I or won't I

Must I or mustn't I

Casting aspersions

Filled with doubt

 

Oh god the tug of war

The pain runs deep

and drains my soul

 

Sitting with my thoughts. 

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  • Howard Manser gold member
    November 26
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    INTROSPECTIVE

    An honest appraisal ... Yin, Yang, and Yuk a Ménage à trois Howard


    • Ann45 gold member
      November 29
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      Howard Manser

      Yes I think so, nothing like an honest appraisal to keep one intune, Thanks for stopping by to read this huni, hope you are well

  • Kevin31
    November 11

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    DEEP

    Wow again another deeply emotional write I think you have found your niche here.


    • Ann45 gold member
      November 12
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      kevin

      Thanks for your comments and support hope all is well with you


  • Beret55 silver member
    October 23

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    The choices we make can and will change out lives, for better or worse. And the war inside on which way to go rages on.
    Very deep poem. I liked it.


    • Ann45 gold member
      October 25
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      Beret55

      Hi Thanks for stopping by. Thank-you for your comments
      Hope all is well with you.


  • condor gold member
    October 21

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    This is quite lovely and I think it could very well be a part of what has been happening to you at this time. I have so often felt like this and wondered, what the hell! but things always do turn out for the best. This seems to be a little different than you normal writes but it is really excellent and thank you for sharing.

    • Ann45 gold member
      October 23
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      condor

      Hell Huni, I do hope your back is better. Yeah This is a raw write and panic and fear of will I be able to look after my mum, Silly really cause we will manage but time will tell how good. Thanks for reading this and leaving your comments


  • rbruce gold member
    October 21

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    Strangely enough I can relate to this poem. Many things come to a head at the one time and you can't decide which way to go first. Happens to most us at some time in our lives.
    Nicely constructed and honest.

    • Ann45 gold member
      October 23
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      rbruce

      Hello my dear Friend, thanks for reading this. This was penned in fear of what if's. but mum is home and well so far so good time will tell if we will manage.




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