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nobody lasts forever.



im secretly holding onto a warped board hoping
that it will save me from falling. the water below
me is deep and the current is stronger than a chain
made of gold.

    and im falling.

your words drip from my ears, splattering on the
ground where my heart is resting, desperatly trying
to beat. you don't realize it, but you've stolen all
of the life out of me.

    and im dieing.

the board couldnt hold the weight of my pain or
the thickness of my tears or the broken edges of
my heart. it split in two, falling, only to suffocate
in the rapid water of an empty life.

    and im gone.

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