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Pain Filled Memories

There once was a girl, with brown hair
and hazel eyes. Her parents treated her
like shit. She then had a boyfriend who
hated her, he broke up with her through
a text message, although she couldn't
text.

Everyone hated her. She felt like she
couldn't live another day. Liking someone
else and dating another her heart got ripped
wide open. She couldn't handle it, so she grabbed
a broken bobby pin. That didn't work, so she grabbed
a razor, and crying she cut herself.

For awhile after she quit, she wore rubber
bands on her wrist to pop herself when she
wanted to cut. Feeling the pain she caused,
she quit for good.

Author notes

This is a personal poem, that really happened to me. There was one part of this whole ordeal where I couldn't handle anything anymore. One guy didn't like me and the other cheated on me and then broke up with me in a text, not to mention me being treated bad by my parents.

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  • blood libel.
    November 25
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    i can only imagine how hard this must be for you. one of my bffs got dumped via msn a few years ago && i know she didn't handle it very well. as for me, i am an ex cutter and know what it feels like to bleed it out, but i've been clean for 6 months (except one honest slip-up) and hope to keep it that way. lemme know if you need to talk.

    love,
    xx.carly.


  • Roseamongweeds
    October 21
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    Congrats, I know how all of that feels (except the bf thing)