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Fin

Let it ease your pain,
Till it numbs your brain.

Until nothing matters,
And everything shatters.

Letting go of all my dreams,
I just want to scream.

There is no more hope,
I can no longer cope.

Happiness is all I sought,
But look what it has brought.

An empty heart,
Just wanting to part.

A soul that doesn't want to stay,
Only to slip away.

Bleeding to the last drop,
I just want it to stop.

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  • bballer21
    November 4

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    wow this is extremely sad, but i loved it. every single word and verse. and i love the rhyme. amazing write, good luck in the contest and keep on writing!

    thanks for entering! (:
    ~~allie


  • dezney
    October 22
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    That was beauitful


  • My Desdemona
    October 21

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    nice... this is such a cool poem, full of pain and sorrow, great write