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[ How i miss your embrace, ]

How i miss your embrace,
A feeling I can never erase.

Seeing you makes my heart race,
And always puts a smile on my face.

Everytime you smile you brighten my day,
I just want to make you stay.

So I can sit with you under the shade,
And make a memory that will never fade.

You can i never forget,
Because you are the loveliest person I ever met.

With a heart so kind
A gentle voice to ease my mind.

You are truly divine,
I want to make you mine.

Just give me a sign,
Make my stars align.

I will love you with all my heart,
And we will never part.

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  • great job i like this good luck in the contest
    xoxo ellie


  • mariam24
    October 28
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    that was definitely a cute poem to adore about that special someone who just makes you smile....thanx 4 tha comment