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self discovery

It’s that all encompassing,
Head pounding pressure
That is building -

Stifling out my surroundings
I’m falling.
Into darkness,

And sadly,
It’s more than painfully apparent.



-To everyone but me. 

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  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    October 21
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    Wow, nice one.

    I read it a few times, and it's lovely. Nice crafting of words.

    Thanks for entering.