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Spider Web

Drowning in an infinite ocean
of agony; I am ending

I struggle to break through the surface
snatching gasps of air before being pulled back under

Ice fills my lungs and everything turns to a
smothering darkness

Can't escape from this misery and I'm
so very tired of trying

Author notes

You may be wondering why the title of the poem is Spider Web. The reason behind it is that one the same page I wrote the poem in my notebook, I had drawn a spider and it's web.

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  • oldschoolhero
    October 28

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    where have you been?
    by the way this is
    awesome