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Crush

When you talk,
I hope you say my name
And the words I need to hear;
Oh but you never do.

When you walk,
I hope you come this way
And follow my footsteps here;
Oh but you never did

When you sing,
I hope you'll sing my praise
And how you'll never forget;
Oh but you never have.

When you love,
I hope it's me you're after
And I'm the only one who'll do;
Oh but you haven't yet.

When I hope,
I hope you'll speak to me
And walk my way, singing;
Oh but you'll love me soon...

...as soon as I get the nerve to tell you my name.

Author notes

I don't care how old you are, you're never too old to have a crush. That hurts-so-good-pang and swoony feeling are all too familiar.

So what's the story you think is behind this poem?

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  • Blood N Tears
    October 22

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    This is so beautiful, and I agree entirely with your notes. Great job!
    Lillie