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Those Funny Things In Life

those funny things I think about
some that don't matter worth a damn
some that do
and somehow I'm laughing
within the wee hours of the night
and left with the realization that life is somehow worth it
because even with all the turmoil
I wouldn't trade a day
for it's the journey
that somehow matters
not the moment.

Oct. 21, 2009

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  • vampira1665 silver member
    November 13
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    OHHH, that is so true. It is the journey! Though sometimes the moments that you experience seem like the end of the world, there is always tomorrow and more miles on your journey.

    Hugs,

    vampi
    And I laugh at myself ALLLLLLLL the time.


  • myrataal silver member
    October 30
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    So very true!

    I giggle often about my own stupidity and often things may become perfect sense or nonsense in retrospect.


    Love
    Myra


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    October 29
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    This is a good poem to read while munching pumpkin seeds

    The idea of you laughing and having this moment of realization is precious.


  • PurringKitten silver member
    October 27

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    very well written as so true..life is worth living no matter what happens..life is so precious even through those lonely nights and days without love..its just as you said...its the jouney that matters most...thank you for sharing with me

  • I likes it!!

    True, true. Life is the journey, and we do the dance. Whatever that means. If you don't have a sense of humor about life, I don't think you can make it. Ummm, let your smile be your umbrella,lol Jani


  • angelica silver member
    October 22

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    Yes Bill, some of the silliest things we think of at night, yet some are important and others you don't need to remember. Very nice poem Bill.

    Love Joan

  • Short and very insightful my friend.

    - Aly


  • Tinselpool
    October 21

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    there are funny things
    running across my mind
    some not worth giving a damn
    and some worth it
    somehow i find myself laughing
    when my mind is turned inside out
    confused, perplexed, and worn out
    and i'm crazy
    because i'm questioning the value
    of life
    because there are those times
    when i wouldn't
    give life a damn

    i know how it feels. a beautiful, insightful piece you have penned. KEEP PENNING DADDY!!!

    luv
    claire


  • Naughtygrlred
    October 21
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    i know what you mean

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