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It's when you can't sleep.


It's like the first crackle
of a leaf you step on the day after it turns fall;
The realization that something new is here
and happening.

It's like the first blizzard of winter,
with so many snowflakes
you become lost in white wind.

It's when you can't sleep
because reality has finally
become better than your dreams.

It's when you start looking up
into the sky to find water colored clouds
instead of looking at cracks in the pavement.

It's because I love you,
but I don't know what to do.

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I want this more than life.

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  • xeroabyss II
    October 24

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    You are but one star in the infinite like universe seeking such grandure.
    I like the foerth stanza.
    It reminds me of thee moments when I actually feel "good", and can let the world fall on my face so that I may float my imagination out into the empyrean with no fear of realitys gravity crashing it back to its earthbound hutch.
    Excellent write in all.