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In Dreams upon Slopes of Grazing Alder



Young alder grazing the slopes
Of river bottomed valleys.

Distant tree line upon the ridge,
Sleeping quietly under calm
Skies of serenity’s embrace.

The distant rapids running;
Their white wigs tumbling,
Over ancient stone tales,
Fossilized remnants of
A million yesterdays,

Their history,
Secreted away under loam,
Embraced in shale and stone,
Their memory,
Resurrected,
By a travelers’ dreams,

In respite under pine’s
Loving arms,

Her needled sighs,
A sojourner’s bed.

Just below a traveler’s path,
A tired wanderer lays his head,

He hears the whispers,
Of grazing alder,

The sun’s last breath,
In red.

Night sky arrives,
In gloried star light,

With moon beam lullaby,
Day’s journey retired,

Night sky, dim fire,
Warming a traveler’s
Slumbering dream.









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  • I.am.the.sun.
    October 22

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    reminds me of a time i wish i lived in good job, this is wonderful! love it


  • BrownEyedGirl575
    October 22

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    This is just beautiful!! Very relaxing and tranquil, a wonderful piece of word art. The visuals you penned are breathtaking.

    Blessings,
    Amy


  • eatingupyourmind
    October 21

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    your so right. This is a very calming write. Im having such a stessfull day and this poem made me forget for a moment.
    thankyou
    Its beautiful and bursting with images.

    • W B Burkholder
      October 21
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      Thanks so much for reading this piece and for your kind words. Much appreciated

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