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Leave Your Mark

I'll be molded into your creation.
I'll turn to your conformation. 
You'll be my creator.
I'll accept the abuse.

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  • BarbedWireButterfly
    October 27

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    A short and powerful piece. The language is perfect for the piece and the way in which you tell the story is concise and meaningful. To begin with the act of giving up is quiet powerful and impacts greatly upon the reader. By showing the 'creator' as someone of a higher status the reader is drawn into a deeper understanding of the piece.

    A very powerful poem.