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Dark and Light

Dark and light
I take a lone flight
Wondering aimlessly though endless night
I cry out not to be heard
Waiting for someone to
Find me
Guide me
Out of my world
Into the light
Shall I follow
Or remain
Dark, but light

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    October 27

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    Very different, but love the way you used dark and light in it. Thank you so much for entering this into my contest and giving me the oppurtunity to read it. Good luck hun!!


  • Uniquely Conformed
    October 22

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    wow

    it was...different. i liked the visualisation(sp?) you used to show the contrast of dark and light great piece


  • RainShatteredDreams
    October 21

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    i like this poem, it is interesting, i cant explain it but it is interesting and it seems as if it is a very wise poem or something. I really like it i like the imagery and the rhyme pattern. i especiallt liked this part
    Wondering aimlessly though endless night.
    there is a lot of power in those words, they are very interesting and good!
    excellent work, good luck in the future!

    -mary-