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Alone

I stand alone in the crowd,
The crowd splits like water around me.
I sit alone, waiting to be found,
Will no one ever see me?

Shivering, I stand alone,
Watching the crowd with all their coats.
Shivering, I watch the people go,
They all go; I stand alone.

I try to see in the dark,
But the darkness closes around me.
I try to see the light in the darkness,
But I cannot; the dark consumes me.

I stand alone in the crowd,
The crowd splits like water around me.
I sit alone, waiting to be found,
Will no one ever see me?

Will no one ever find me?

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  • This was a very well written piece. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering and best of luck too you in the contest. Thanks for the read.


  • Stolen memories
    October 21
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    ..I'm no one?

  • aychellus gold member
    October 21
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    youll not be alone for long ,much impressed!!!!