Appearing as a rainbow with a myriad of colors each distinct within itself
A composition of various elements made from a kaleidoscope of dust
Upon which all of humanity has come to thrive an flourish despite themselves.
Amidst the ominous grays of life one can detect the warmth of golden rays
Underneath the supreme reverence of peacefulness that emanates from above
Uncountable is the possibilities it brings to the hearts of those who listen an obeys
Adulation which brings forth the glorious exaltation of the deity of His love.
Unrivaled by the uniqueness and depth that lays within Sky-heaven’s plane
Appears God like angels empowered within three spheres of all nine orders
Awaiting the dawning of a new day when His rule will for all eternity reign
Unrivaled by mankind in this sunrise cast beyond the Rainbow’s border.
Author notes
What lies beyond the rainbow's colors,the pot of gold or better yet the promise of eternal love for all of mankind.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Pisces rainbow.
700 points, ended November 3, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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accomplished freeform although the subject matter is one i avoid like the plague , nice imagery and beautiful sentiment


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Your love and belief shine through in this poem. It is a little complex for me, guess my expression is always in a far simpler form
but we should all express our selves in our own way and be true to ourselves.
Cherry
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Such depth and knowledge expressed in your take on the prompt....You open our understanding into your insight on the symbol of the rainbow... all the best in the contest!


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We all have it within us... that special Rainbow of God's love.,We see it in the mirror as it is staring right back at us!
Your comments and applause is greatly appreciated my friend..
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I am so impressed

yet not surprised
as I was smiling throughout and nodding
Here I am looking for my favorite line

yeah!!!!!
all of them
Thank you
Thank you...
wow!
you have out done yourself
Awaiting the dawning of a new day when His rule will for all eternity reign

just one gem of what have written

God bless you Sam...



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You are most kind with your comments which mean more to me than simple words...
A message is on it's way.
May peace and happiness be with you,my friend.
Sam
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for God gave the beauty captured in soul as he dressed the other in many colors shown. our hearts can enjoy the message he told
beautiful Sam hugs always♥

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My thanks and appreciation to you for the consideration you have expressed .His message is Eternity if we but love and obey.
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