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Beyond the Rainbow's Border...

Upon the clouds of omnipotence  He sends us His wish for each of us
Appearing as a rainbow with a myriad of colors each distinct within itself
A composition of various elements made from a kaleidoscope of dust
Upon which all of humanity has come to thrive an flourish despite themselves.

Amidst the ominous grays of life one can detect the warmth of  golden rays
Underneath the supreme reverence of  peacefulness that emanates from above
Uncountable is the possibilities it brings to the hearts of those who listen an obeys
Adulation which brings forth the glorious exaltation of  the deity of His love.

Unrivaled by the uniqueness and depth that lays within Sky-heaven’s plane
Appears God like angels empowered within three spheres of all nine orders
Awaiting the dawning of a new day when His rule will for all eternity reign
Unrivaled by mankind in this sunrise cast beyond  the Rainbow’s border.

Author notes

What lies beyond the rainbow's colors,the pot of gold or better yet the promise of eternal love for all of mankind.

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  • aychellus gold member
    October 27
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    accomplished freeform although the subject matter is one i avoid like the plague , nice imagery and beautiful sentiment


  • Cherrylv
    October 27

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    Your love and belief shine through in this poem. It is a little complex for me, guess my expression is always in a far simpler form but we should all express our selves in our own way and be true to ourselves.

    Cherry xxx


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 26

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    Such depth and knowledge expressed in your take on the prompt....You open our understanding into your insight on the symbol of the rainbow... all the best in the contest!


    • who iam
      October 26
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      We all have it within us... that special Rainbow of God's love.,We see it in the mirror as it is staring right back at us!
      Your comments and applause is greatly appreciated my friend..


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 21

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    I am so impressed

    yet not surprised

    as I was smiling throughout and nodding

    Here I am looking for my favorite line 

    yeah!!!!!

    all of them

     

    Thank you

    Thank you...

     

    wow!

    you have out done yourself

     

    Awaiting the dawning of a new day when His rule will for all eternity reign 

     

    just one gem of what have written 

     

     

    God bless you Sam...

     

     

     

     

    • who iam
      October 21
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      You are most kind with your comments which mean more to me than simple words...

      A message is on it's way.

      May peace and happiness be with you,my friend.

      Sam


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 21

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    for God gave the beauty captured in soul as he dressed the other in many colors shown. our hearts can enjoy the message he told
    beautiful Sam hugs always♥

    • who iam
      October 21
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      My thanks and appreciation to you for the consideration you have expressed .His message is Eternity if we but love and obey.

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