Droplets of water,
prisms of light,
showing the colours
contained within sight.
Here is a message
bridging the sky,
fragile with beauty,
soft as a sigh.
Life is in motion,
falling to earth,
nature awaits
expectations of birth.
Strength within weakness,
force falls proclaim,
life is renewed
within each drop of rain.
Just like the ocean,
we are the rain,
rising to heaven,
returning again.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Pisces rainbow.
700 points, ended November 3, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Leaves the reader feeling well connected and a knowing that all is ok. Well done as always. Namaste, my friend - Bonita
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Thankyou Bonita
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. It felt so peaceful and happy. Just like a feather it was light and breezy.
You make it sound so special.
Lana
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Thankyou Lana, lovely to hear from you
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This reads so smooth and sweet David. Last verse leaves the reader with some insight freely shared.
Very nicely done.
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Thankyou Pixie, great to hear from you
David
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In rhyme no less
and beautiful
your ending has a twist of profound
love this!!!!
very very well rhymed
from beginning right to the end
loved every word
God bless you David...
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Thankyou kathy, I was just about to read your most recent poem when your comments flashed on my screen., when i saw that lovely picture of a rainbow, I had to give it my best
Regards David
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Lovely picture and metaphor you present within your poem, bro. Nature's renewal of earth, the cycles of life are presented here...Terrific insight rhyme and flow make it delightful and so inspirational! All the best in the contest!
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Well thankyou Sis, lovely to hear from you, we can learn so much from observing nature,
Love David
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This is beautiful, to relate to the prisms of the rainbow, the feeling of the rain to saturate our flesh, inspiring. Excellent. Blessings.
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Thankyou lovely of you to read and comment
Regards David
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