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Please (Love me)

You're
never in
my grasp,
so I never
let you free.
You're never
in love,
even though I
was on my
knees.
You never
listened,
never hearing
my pleas. So now
I'm writing this
begging you
"please"...

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  • Baby iloveyou
    October 22

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    ........

    i know exactly how you feel. you cant change a guy/girls feelings. and waiting is killer! your loved reanna and don't ever 4get that!


  • HugsForEveryone
    October 21

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    Aww. =[
    I know what you mean. But no matter how much you plead and ask and beg, nothing can change a person's feelings. You might just have to wait. Waiting is hard, but patience is a virtue.

    <3
    Kera

  • I can relate. Veryveryvery much I can really relate Rea. Amazing poem though. Great flow throughout. Hope you're okay though, stay strong. <3 :]

  • darkness420
    October 21
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    if its for who i thinnk its for....hes not worth the effort....


  • ArmyBrat17
    October 21
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    thats really good

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