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Train Of Thought...




the entrails and gore
artistically spattered on the floor
are just meant to add color
to the ingenius devices of torture
that the fragile human body,
and often times, the mind,
are sometimes subjected to in this
"life",
just as paint is applied to a skilled drawing...



and thus goes my train of thought

...internal masochism







Author notes

10-20-09

this was actually the ending of a personal journal entry that i did yesterday. i wrote about some pretty random things of fancy...

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  • Andy.
    October 26

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    Holy hell, i'd like to read the beginning and middle of the journal entry!
    I get the metaphorical aspect of it all though.
    Tis an ever engaged riot in progress in the corner of my head designated as the "luny bin" for all those parts of me that need restrained confinement.
    Tends to get a bit messy on the sublevels.


    • k.a.s.s.i.e
      October 27
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      so glad it interests you! geezus i know what you're talking about, but of course you already know, having read this piece of Psychotic Kassie lol


  • Visit.Me.On.Mars
    October 26
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    Dude this is pretty fricken
    awsome.
    I must read it again. =]


  • humblpye gold member
    October 22

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    Sounds like your train of thought really ran you over Kass! wow!
    I like the way you express your thoughts and feelings, gutsy and outspokenly real!
    Nice to see you up an writing again!
    John

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