Grab a gun,
grab a knife,
grab a rope,
end your life.
Pull the trigger,
make a cut,
taught the rope,
die you hope!
Easy steps,
to do you see,
suicides just,
1, 2, 3!
Set it up,
standards high,
call your friends,
tell them goodbye.
While you cry,
you must lie,
so now is your time,
to harshly die.
The side effects are cruel,
this last lonely duel,
just so easy you see,
suicides just 1, 2, 3!
Author notes
I was aiming for this to be kind of like an ad for suicide. Not sure.
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P.S... LAY OFF THE SICKY MEDS!
LOL
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Hmmmm... this defiantely came off as an ad for suicide with the quick catchy rhyme you've written this with. I think there are a lot of people like the commenter below that would prefer to not have these thoughts in their head... which is why it's good to have it on paper instead... hehe that rhymed
Anyway... I don't really see it as glamorizinv suicide... but it's not really noted in a bad light the way you wrote this... it kinda gave me a feeling that suicide was being mocked with a very sarcastic undertone to your words. That's what I see
Still a well executed rhyming write as always
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omg i love it... its jumps from decisions on suicide its interesting
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Umm... interesting, but I prefer not to have these thoughts in my mind. Line numbers 13 - 25, they brought back my thoughts, and I disliked that. I prefer not wanting to kill myself and ponder why I even looked at this poem. Very sorry. But that's my criticism on this poem. -
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Quite alright. Just my way of thinking. Thanks for the comment. =]
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wow. i dont know whether that is glamorizing suicide or not. either way. it's an interesting write. i like it.
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