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Apple

Apple

I sit in the bowl,
attending the smooth curve of your knife
as its glare cuts across the room.

Your smile flashes,
and my skin flushes a pink delicious
shade of fear.

Your mind, a maze, a sleeping snake,
watches and waits.

Breathing down my trembling neck,
brushing me with your sharp collar,
my flesh boils, seething, baking.

You strike:
the serpent's fang plunges into the tearful,
sticky ripeness.
Down the middle, a deep hole aches
as the seeds of a desperate mind are wrenched
and torn.

A cored fruit screams with abhorent juice
and naked, raw, fermenting flesh

and rots.

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  • One of the best poems ive read in months, great job, loved every moment of it and it kept me hanging on until the end!