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Suicide Watch

Watch me cry
Watch me scream

See all the pain
See the blood flow from my skin

When your on suicide watch they see everything

They see your tears
They hear your crys

Thats what makes them watch you
They watch you while you die

They watch you while your alive
they watch you till you slowly
like a snail
you slowly expire

what should i have donr differently

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Kenshin Satsuki
    November 26
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    very true

    everything is right about this poem, the feelings about it and the people just watching. as if there just watching a video they cant do anything about it and they know it can end horribly but they watch anyways. very well done love it a lot

  • teamo09
    October 23
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    wow

    hey this a great poem. and I really get it.


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    October 21

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    humz. more painful.. see I want you to write better piece, plz keep yourself away from pain
    for Me~
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words