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Bloody Tears

The flames consume,
Everyone is gone.
Now, I sit and stare
With bloody tears
Running down my face

The flames resume,
Everything is gone,
Now, I stand and scream
With bloody tears,
Running down my face

The floods have come
The flames are gone,
Now, I lay, confused,
As the floods
Wash my bloody tears away

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  • DeathlyHollow666
    November 3
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    i like how its one point, repeated. Its very easy to understand.