Dear Mother,
Why arent you here
At a time when I need you so near
Dear Mother,
Why did you leave
Your words of love would only decieve
Dear Mother,
Tell me, do you hate me
Im not sure where your mind might be
Dear Mother,
You obviously dont care
Your absence and carelessness isnt fair
Dear Mother,
Couldnt you at least say your goodbyes
Please ignore the tears in my eyes
Dear Mother,
I dont need you
But clearly this is something you already knew
Dear Mother,
Im saying so long
I hope your fun was worth all the wrong
What did you think
Comments
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Yes, this piece did the same for me as it did the CrimsonRegret713. Your piece speaks very loudly and is full of the type of emotions one would expect in such circumstances. Well done indeed.
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I connected with this
It reminded me a lot of my own mother. Being able to remind people of themselves is a wonderful skill to have when you're a writer. Good job.
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