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Always

Here I am the person that loves you so, why do you push me away like you do.
If its to punish me for something I did, guess what I understand what I did.
If your pushing me away because your frighten I'll run, guess what if I was frighted
wouldn't I've already ran. You try to act like your Mr. Cool, and nothing ever hurts you.
Guess what I knew different, I know you better that I know myself. You my love are my other half, you complete me like I complete you.

You know me just as well as I know you. Whenever we're apart for a period of time, I miss that smile, I miss those brown eyes, I miss the sound of your laugh, just the the sound of your voice. The way to you look at me when you want me, it sends chills down my spine. Then there's also that look in your eye when you don't think I'm looking, I know that you are I can feel you staring. I see that look I know that I'm loved.
We might have our moments where we do stupid things, that annoy one another. But, look here were still together, we work out of tif, and we love each other than ever.

What relationship don't fight isn't ever one complete. A relationship that doesn't fight, it never grows. You told me this, and I remember it every time we fight, and know we'll be stronger because of it, sometimes its hard to remember. But that's only because I love you so much, it hurts to fight. Mostly now it hurts to fight, it hurts to fight because I don't see you as much as I did, with you now away for school it makes things harder, to make up for. I want to make up for some of the things said and done, or never done. I want to make these things right, because I know I am at the fault.

I know I do stupid things, that usually upset you or have made you mad in the past.
You always forgive me for everything, that I've done. You know I'm sorry when I've done the
things that I've done. But your not scott free of the things you have done, but I can stay mad,
I've been one to stay mad, I can't help it sometimes I know I should. But I just can't help not to be mad, you my sexy man, and I love you so much. I know I do these things I have done, will someday be forgotten. But right now their fresh on you mind. I want to say I'm sorry I know it means nothing now. But, hopefully soon you know that I am.

My sexy man, please forgive me. Please I love you so.
Your my world, I've done some stupid things, but I didn't mean to. Just know I love you, with everything in me, I didn't mean the stupid things I said, and the things I did.
Even if you forgive me right now.
Always know I'm always yours, no matter way.
I love you.

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  • Night Rose
    November 2

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    white rose wolf

    I really loved reading this, i hope he realizes you love him and yours sorry this really touched me good luck in this contest

    sincerly,
    angel


  • MzDimeDivia
    October 23
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    great

    i understand how you feel this poem has touched me i wish you the best of luck