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I burnt my hand
staring into
your blind eyes

A contest entry

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  • KatherineAnne
    October 21

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    In a way I really get this, but on the other hand... I don't.
    How can you burn your hand by staring into blind eyes?
    But anyway. I get the concept, I think. I like the simple three line poems that say a lot.

    This would be one of them that really gets to me.

    Thank you so much for sharing.

    -Kati Anne


  • ZachP silver member
    October 21

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    Wow. For some reason, this seems to strike a chord within my heart.
    You manage to say a great deal in just a few words.
    Wow.

    Well done, dear poet.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Zach Estel.