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Thinking About You

When I stop and think about you
My heart is full of affection
Tears begin to flow anew
My soul has found its intersection

I listen to the past that was lost
Ponder the significance and meaning
Wondering what has been the cost
I sense the spirit intervening

I find a love I've never known before
A dormant part of my soul raised to life
All my emotions take flight and begin to soar
A sweet sense of peace replaces all strife

My eyes look upon your very soul
I see where joy has replaced despair
I see where life has taken its toll
I see beauty beyond compare

I sense you are not so far away
My heart and soul are where you lay

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  • duana
    October 21

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    This is beautiful Melphleg. I think you will reach a lot of people with this because we can all relate this this and someone always comes to mind in such a poem that captures these feelings so well!


  • Sweetangelgrace
    October 21

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    I think that is a wonderful poem. I do love the rhyming scheme and it touched me in more ways...Many people has pass through situation like this one, so I.
    Good job!

    GRACY