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Play god with me

I'll play Hell and you play Heaven,
the emblem on my heart screams truth as tripple six burns into my skull.
Abysmal passages fill the darkest reaches of my mind, I must fight...must resist...

Jesus is risen, it's no surprise...the tainted smell of filth between those legs could...aaah
just eat me, drink me - swallow me whole.
Rape the soul of virtue and embrace my sweet, saddening sadistic love.

Distort your face for me, I'll bathe in your tears- my sweet Angel of sin,
bask in my embrace as your bones- cracking and crumbling - bring sweet symphonic harmonies to my ears...

Be still, child...
Embrace the darkness and let it burn a vast blackness into a puritanical soul,
bathe in the lies that so lustfully invite your innocent eyes.
Stare into death and pray tell- do you like what you see?

Ring around the rosies,
pockets full of fear,
let me play god with you-
sinful Angel
I
AM
HERE...

Author notes

'and I realize, how strange the living feel'

this poem DOES NOT refer to any REAL religious icons, do not be offended.

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  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    October 30

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    This is an AWESOME piece ... but to be honest I am a bit put off by the subject matter though I placed no restrictions on that for this contest....truthfully, I am the type of person that is a firm believer in "what ever floats your boat"

    Having said that, you have spun a dark tale full of startling images with superb diction and flow!

    Thanks for entering and Good Luck in the Contest!


  • darkyinsoul
    October 27

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    excellent

    as alawys your imagery
    is superb my friend
    well done poetess
    love this stanza..

    Ring around the rosies,
    pockets full of fear,
    let me play god with you-
    sinful Angel
    I
    AM
    HERE...

    good luck to you in the contest
    thanks for the share
    Darky


  • spideracer gold member
    October 26

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    There goes that ''Ring around the rosies'''again, lol! Awesome imagery marry this poem with the darkness within, such that some might see this as offensive, yet they shouldn't but a tad few might still be offended. ''emblim'', it is spelt ''emblem'' by the way. Well done and good luck in this contest.