I'll play Hell and you play Heaven,
the emblem on my heart screams truth as tripple six burns into my skull.
Abysmal passages fill the darkest reaches of my mind, I must fight...must resist...
Jesus is risen, it's no surprise...the tainted smell of filth between those legs could...aaah
just eat me, drink me - swallow me whole.
Rape the soul of virtue and embrace my sweet, saddening sadistic love.
Distort your face for me, I'll bathe in your tears- my sweet Angel of sin,
bask in my embrace as your bones- cracking and crumbling - bring sweet symphonic harmonies to my ears...
Be still, child...
Embrace the darkness and let it burn a vast blackness into a puritanical soul,
bathe in the lies that so lustfully invite your innocent eyes.
Stare into death and pray tell- do you like what you see?
Ring around the rosies,
pockets full of fear,
let me play god with you-
sinful Angel
I
AM
HERE...
Author notes
'and I realize, how strange the living feel'
this poem DOES NOT refer to any REAL religious icons, do not be offended.
A contest entry
- DARK Quotes From the POEMS of Redmoonnrizing by redmoonnrizing.
1600 points, ended October 31, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an AWESOME piece ... but to be honest I am a bit put off by the subject matter though I placed no restrictions on that for this contest....truthfully, I am the type of person that is a firm believer in "what ever floats your boat"

Having said that, you have spun a dark tale full of startling images with superb diction and flow!
Thanks for entering and Good Luck in the Contest! -
excellent
as alawys your imagery
is superb my friend
well done poetess
love this stanza..
Ring around the rosies,
pockets full of fear,
let me play god with you-
sinful Angel
I
AM
HERE...
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky


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There goes that ''Ring around the rosies'''again, lol! Awesome imagery marry this poem with the darkness within, such that some might see this as offensive, yet they shouldn't but a tad few might still be offended. ''emblim'', it is spelt ''emblem'' by the way. Well done and good luck in this contest.





