Thou, who art awake
dry my tears troubling me so painfully today
show me how to see this all a better way
hold my hand as we look with candor together
upon all my fallacious fears of evil brothers
through your light, your strength and vision
I can face my deepest, darkest demons
in my distorted dreams of evil scenes,
my illusory monsters frightening me
Thou, who art awake
so grateful am I that I was mistaken
so grateful for your holy healing vision,
for your infinite love I have blocked so long;
soon, all my fears and tears shall be gone
In a list
A contest entry
- my tear drops... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended October 24, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Precious...
A beautiful paean sung with mellifluous and enchanting voice... "Hold My Hand" is poetic majestic in contents and message.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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Indeed I agree with the words..and love the hope by the end you brought in the words..and that is the light behind the life we all are waiting ...thank you so much for the entry...
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This is beautiful and so truly inspirational. I hope many understand this fine message, for it holds the key to life

Gaylene


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I Love the Idea of talking to ''one who is awake'' Bonita.
It could help in the process of our own awakening.
An insightful poem
David

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How we do separate and point
can we point to deception that is within all of us
soon all my tears and fears shall be gone
removing the shadow to see the light
brilliant Bonita
God bless you my friend...

Kathy


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