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Drunken Mess

I wake up in the morning
With a beer can by my side
No memory of last night
Everythings out of sight

Where did everybody go
And why is everything so slow
Its always the same old mysteries
I dont want this kind of history

Again I confess
Another drunken mess
Where did my innocense go
Someone please let me know

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  • condor gold member
    October 23

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    I have only been there once in my life and that was enough for me. It's the spinning that got me. I get motion sickness at the best of times. lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • toomysterious
    October 23

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    Good poetry, for it is in the expressing of emotions, of wants and needs that we unravel the strings that bind us. Keep up the writing, and thanks for your comments on mine.


  • awannabepoet
    October 22

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    It is a great loss of which you speak for the time you spent passed out is when you normaly would have been at your best.

    Please think on it and refrain if you can.