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Dawn

Dawn
by Darmok

Breath deep the last of sleep,
On horizons edge the morn will keep.

The break of day so brief so sweet,
the quiet breath of dawns' retreat.

Behold her veil of gold complete,
starlight fades with dreams... replete,

the dim of night rests gently, sleeps
whilst dawn awakens the day repeats.

Author notes

In every rise and every set,
this slow dance of day and night
captures the 'rest' of the day, and
her beautiful nakedness as she awakens...

I wonder in amazement
what it must be like
where the days are long and endless
as she stretches lustfully across
a golden horizon
holding back the coming of day
or the setting sun.

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  • Darmok
    November 13
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    Lb Rb

    I am seldom found ...tho I have tried in earnest
    with pensive stares and sleepless nights.
    I have looked there amongst my dreams and
    thought I knew....until it broke.
    that wonderous spell of dreamstate 'awakening',
    foolish gleem from an overdose of alphawave surf.
    Yes, I would ask that question of myself ...who are you...?
    I think I am ....hah...at times found in my written
    word, and sure enough some have said my name,
    but I think these pages are more of who he is,
    rather than who I am. If I truely were him, I think
    I would be in love right now, because I shamelessly
    agree with you.....there are some amazing words here
    that reveal his inner nature and sensitivity. I think
    I am 'elusive', inspired by beauty and shared cereberally
    with a creative muse that occassionally holds my hand
    as friend, and lends me these wonderous thoughts
    that still perplex me....as wonder and dream again
    of who I am and where is love.
    (Lb Rb)


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 12
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    read. Who are you?? This is beautiful!

  • Darmok
    October 22
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    Rusty

    Thank you for the read and comments. I'm very rusty and wish I could say I found muse again. CU soon ...darmok


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 21

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    excellent~

    Beautiful as always sweetie
    I will have to catch up on your poems
    I have always loved reading yours.......love the imagery in this as well
    A winner in my book
    I just posted a new one as well
    Hope you come see me too
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

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