You found me,
lying on the floor,
cold as stone,
surrounded by the memories,
I just couldn't chase away.
You look down, and see my letter...
only two words;
I'm sorry.
You scream at the empty room,"how could you do this to me??"
like someone was there to hear you.
But here's what i have to say to you;
Where were you when my world came crashing down??
Why did you let me go, instead of holding on tighter??
Where were you when my greatest fear came out to play??
Why didn't you guide the way??
You saw me struggling, and chose to do nothing,
but when you finally chose to act,
it was too late...
and you found me...why did you wait??
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Girl, I think this is the best I've seen from you yet.
"only two words;
I'm sorry.
You scream at the empty room, "how could you do this to me??"
I'm proud of you. This is a whole new level of writing.
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thank u. lol this was one that i didn't spend much time on either...one i wasn't as proud of lol
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wow
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wow what??
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nothing
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no seriously...what??
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This one really tears at my heart. I can relate to this one. Such emotion here. A glimpse of a soul in peril, I hope things get better. Thank you for sharing this with us. Huge healing
's for you
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thank u!!
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