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Your past

Even if you run fast
You can’t escape your past
Take a look at my eyes
And see the tears I cry
You’re the reason why
I want to die
To end my life
I’m walking on Deaths scythe
I’m falling into the dark
Death is leaving his mark
I’m falling way to fast
This won’t be my last.

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  • svetlana2009
    October 22
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    DEEP REALLY DEEP...I CAN FEEL THE EMOTION IN THIS ONE
    KEEP UR HEAD UP

  • Wow

    that's really good. i felt your emotion through the poem.